If you don’t live it, it won’t come out of your horn. ~ Charlie Parker
Day in a Haiku: February 17 2008
We added another twist to this week’s Day in a Sentence by transforming it into Day in a Haiku, which also forces a certain brevity of thought. I was pleased to read these poems as they filtered into my blog throughout the week (a flurry on Sunday) and even put out a call for haikus on Twitter, just to see what would happen (tepid response in the Twitterverse, though).
Here, then, are your poems for this week:
Larry, who suggested the idea of a Haiku for the feature, checked in as he was checking out and hopefully, returning unscathed by the experience:
Preparing to go
on San Francisco field trip
I hope to survive
Lisa, who came via Twitter (hi Lisa!), wrote what was on my mind as last Friday approached:
Final day of school
Vacation is here at last
Much needed respite
Liza’s poem had me singing a children’s song in my head.
Relax your brain and draw
Polly wolly doodle all the day
Art springs forth from idle hands
Valentine’s Day found a way into Ben D’s poem:
Writing utensils
scar paper and stitch up hearts
both at the same time.
Sara, Sara, Sara. My old friend, Sara, got into a bit of hot water lately with the bigwigs but I will bet her students still love her.
Administrators
Say I’m “Unsatisfactory”
But just with them.
Ben. B needs sleep? Who needs sleep? I need sleep.
Three-day weekend? Great.
Sleep in this week. At least next
Weekend’s three days, too.
Bonnie was a reluctant poet this week. But that didn’t stop her from captured the winter in her words.
Icy roads stopped travel
But not Tuvia, no chance
Steps on the stairs, welcomed.
Karen was feeling the Haiku rush, and submitted two poems. The first is inspired (is that the right word?) by some classroom management issues that are vexing her.
Pushed to the limit
Students are out of control
Need to reign them in(Karen writes: Stress is running high because our state tests are in less than a month)
Testing days are soon
Last minute preparations
I know they will ROCK!
Mary lives a few hours away and wrote what I was seeing out my window this week during a blast of rainy winter weather.
No morning sun just
Icy drops striking ice snow
Winter symphony
Karen, too, saw winter, but she saw it as an opportunity to relax a bit and enter into the quiet.
Winter, pre-dawn snow
School, on a two-hour delay
Work, peace and quiet.
Amy is another friend needing a snooze. Meanwhile, she has some work on her plate.
Report card writing
Fiction story editing
Can I take a nap?
Lynn submitted her poem, but also gave a detailed explanation. The poem comes first:
windy blacktop
laughing retreat
sound failsAnd then, the explanation:
Our whole school (950 total) assembled outside for a rally for charity, Friday in the AM. Wind and cold (Cali-style) caused teachers and students to huddle like pigeons on a ledge. The sound system failed its contest with the wind so all marched back into class mostly laughing. It was the capper to a week in which I had a miserable head cold and two all-day district training sessions. But, in between I also experienced riches, including the return of my “writer,” a professional who comes once a week to write with me and 6 students after school. We kept going while he was out of town, but it was really great to have him back.
Mary, a friend from Western Massachusetts, reminded me of the buckets around my school this week, following the rain-ice storm.
sheets of rain on roof
drip through the ceiling below
pails in place of desks
Christine looked at the room around her for inspiration.
Modular Classroom:
Chills from tin windows
Warming the room from within
Students sneaking in
Jo has testing on the mind and so do the students. So writing, writing, writing.
We’re writing away.
SOLs are coming up.
Oh, to know the prompt.Jo added: I’m in Virginia, and my eleventh-graders have to take the writing parts of their (end-of-course) Standards of Learning tests the first week of March. Oh, joy!
It’s a bit of a frantic mood in Cynthia’s World.
Research paper time
Seniors rushing to finish
Deadline’s drawing near!
Frank (new to Day in a Sentence) is down in Mexico but writes that he loves Haikus for their simplicity and as a genre that his students can enter into as writers.
The warmth of the sun
Touches me with tender love
Then the night falls fast
Thanks to everyone for their beautiful poems.
Peace (in poetry),
Kevin
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