Archive for May, 2010

Cheryl is “wishing” for Days in a Sentence

dayinsentenceiconMy friend up north, Cheryl, is hosting this week’s Day in a Sentence and she is using Wallwisher for the activity. (Wallwisher is a virtual bulletin board). So, please, visit Cheryl’s Wallwisher, leave her a note with your Day in a Sentence, and come on back over the weekend to read what others have shared.

Go to Day in a Sentence on the Wall

Or do it here:

Peace (in your days),
Kevin

Picture Book 4: The Best Ice Cream in the Galaxy

So, I am into day four of the Picture Book Challenge with Paula Yoo (seven books in seven days) and this one is sort a light-hearted picture book about ice cream and an alien invasion. I tried to keep the language peppy and fun, and given the warm weather where I live, about ice cream.

Read: The Best Ice Cream in the Galaxy

The Best Ice Cream in the Galaxy on Storybird

Peace (in the slurp),
Kevin

Am I the King of Similes?

I spend the month of April writing poems each day over at Bud Hunt’s blog. There were some cool ones and some throw-aways. That’s writing under pressure for you. I gathered up the 30 poems and dumped them into Wordle, just to see if there any emerging themes from what I was writing.

Here’s what I noticed: I used the word “like” a lot. Like, too much. Like, I must be overusing similes in my poems. And I think when I do write poems, I do use similes and metaphors a bit too much, because I am trying to move the poem from something concrete to something abstract, and that’s difficult to do without those comparisons. I don’t intend to abandon the use of these literary devices, but I like how the Wordle made that visible.

Also, it’s neat that “music” and “mind” were part of a lot of the poems. I’m not sure what to make of the word “even” as the most prevalent word in the batch of poems. It doesn’t seem to have much meaning for me.

Here was the last poem that I wrote with Bud to end April’s National Poetry Month:

I’m forever letting my tongue dance
over phrases
and even while the silent world ignores me,
I continue on with my “inside” compositions,
scribbling alone in the dark corner of my mind,
turning ideas over like compost as I wait
for the flowers to bloom.
I’ve come to the realization that not everyone hears
the words as I hear them,
nor do they dance to the same rhythm,
and so,
what begins as a conversation among many
often ends as a monologue of one.

Peace (in the poems),
Kevin

National Picture Book Week, book three: Remember

This is the third picture book I have made this week as part of a challenge with Paula Yoo and I was thinking of this girl under the bridge and imagined that she was dreaming of her future. The word “remember” came to mind, although it is not clear if she is looking ahead or looking back. I purposely kept that somewhat nebulous, although the last page gives some hints.

Read Remember.

Remember … on Storybird

Peace (in the books),
Kevin

Picture Book Challenge, Day 2: The Boy with the Angry Stomach

I’m in day two of the National Picture Book Writing Week (NaPiBoWriWee — that’s a mouthful, eh?)  with Paula Yoo, and again, I turn to Storybird for the art and inspiration. In this book, I imagine a storyteller (a piece of bread!) telling the tale of a young boy learning about anger. The story emerged from looking at the picture on the cover here. I wondered: what would a face in your stomach say to you? And what would the kid think? From there came The Boy with the Angry Stomach.

The Boy With the Angry Stomach on Storybird

Peace (in the story),
Kevin

Day One: MoonSong

I realized that I needed to wait until the kind folks at Storybird moderated my picture book story until I could get the embed code for it. This is part of the Picture Book Challenge.

This book is called MoonSong.

MoonSong on Storybird

Peace (in the song),
Kevin

National Picture Book Writing Week

Not another challenge. Yes, another challenge. This one is National Picture Book Writing Week, in which blogger Paula Yoo is challenging folks to create seven picture books in seven days. That seems like a lot, and if I were to draw, it would be impossible. But I am a writer and I do love a challenge, so I am going to use Storybird to see how many books I can create this week.

Here is Day One. The book is called MoonSong, and I was thinking of how to weave music into a picture book story. I wondered: what if the moon were inspiration but didn’t know it. (I am having trouble finding the embed code, so here is the link to the book at the Storybird site).

MoonSong

Peace (in the books),
Kevin