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	<title>Kevin's Meandering Mind &#187; Poetry</title>
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		<title>Writing Poems with Bud</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Apr 2009 20:43:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#8217;d like to toss out some thanks to Bud the Teacher for giving me daily poetry inspiration with his photographs. I&#8217;ve been enjoying the experience. Here are a few poems from the past week that I have written that I still like a few days later:
Nighttime Cleaning
(listen to the podcast)
Some nights,
I&#8217;d like to hang you [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;d like to toss out some thanks to <a href="http://budtheteacher.com/blog/">Bud the Teacher</a> for giving me daily poetry inspiration with his photographs. I&#8217;ve been enjoying the experience. Here are a few poems from the past week that I have written that I still like a few days later:</p>
<blockquote><p><strong>Nighttime Cleaning</strong><br />
<a href="http://www.box.net/shared/static/vl9rngcnrk.mp3">(listen to the podcast)</a></p>
<p>Some nights,<br />
I&#8217;d like to hang you out to dry<br />
with the clothes<br />
when you come home all wet<br />
with whiskey and beer<br />
and laughter from your podium at the bar<br />
while I console the kids in their nightmare deliriums<br />
and use the remote to talk with<br />
as the wind brings in life from the streets<br />
through our open windows.</p></blockquote>
<blockquote><p><strong>Oh, Golden Saxophone</strong><br />
<a href="http://www.box.net/shared/static/sxq3yh6j1z.mp3">(listen to the podcast)</a></p>
<p>Oh, deep moaning gold<br />
you delight me with your voice<br />
gentle spirits pushing up from within<br />
blasting notes begin<br />
to tell the story of dancing ideas<br />
that can&#8217;t remain on the page</p>
<p>Your reed tastes of the forest<br />
your keys click with rhythm<br />
your pads hold in and let go<br />
like a heartbeat to the pulse of time</p>
<p>In the hands of some, you shimmer<br />
along the tops of the melody lines<br />
in a freeflow improvisation tapping into something unknown;<br />
In others, you follow the rules &#8211;<br />
straight, narrow, perfect &#8211;<br />
and deviate not one iota from what the composer<br />
has envisioned.</p>
<p>Oh, saxophone, you are a wild beast<br />
in my hands<br />
and I mull the possibilities of what might emerge<br />
when I place you to my lips<br />
and blow the world a kiss.</p></blockquote>
<blockquote><p><strong>Infinity Feelings</strong><br />
<a href="http://www.box.net/shared/static/hp6p0srflz.mp3">(listen to the podcast)</a></p>
<p>The blue hue of swirls<br />
forces my hand -<br />
I must admit:<br />
doubt;<br />
fear;<br />
longing inside me where the facade crumbles &#8211;<br />
the only voice is mine<br />
and it only knows truth.</p></blockquote>
<blockquote><p><strong>i am the white blanket</strong><br />
<a href="http://www.box.net/shared/static/16z7tgs7ql.mp3">(listen to the podcast)</a></p>
<p>i am the cold:<br />
the chill that comes with spring;<br />
the frost that covers you<br />
so that you lay quietly dormant,<br />
expectant for release,<br />
only to be told to wait, wait, wait;<br />
i hesitate,<br />
knowing that once the snow has melted,<br />
the ice removed,<br />
you will come into your own without me<br />
and our roles reversed &#8212; i will be gone,<br />
no longer necessary &#8211;<br />
and that, i cannot even begin to fathom<br />
beneath this white blanket<br />
we share together</p></blockquote>
<p>I hope you find time in your days to write or read poetry, and not just this month but throughout the entire year.</p>
<p>Peace (in poems),<br />
Kevin</p>
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		<title>The Red Sled</title>
		<link>http://dogtrax.edublogs.org/2009/02/06/the-red-sled/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Feb 2009 10:52:50 +0000</pubDate>
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This photo is from my backyard and it reminded me of the imagery from the William Carlos Williams&#8217; poem, Red Wheelbarrow. (The photo is part of the Photofridays project, too)
Remember?
so much depends
upon
 a red wheel
barrow
 glazed with rain
water
 beside the white
chickens.
What about:

so much depends
upon
 the red plastic
sled
 covered with white
snow
 beside the children&#8217;s
tracks.
Peace (in a [...]]]></description>
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<p>This photo is from my backyard and it reminded me of the imagery from the William Carlos Williams&#8217; poem, <a href="http://www.writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88/wcw-red-wheel.html">Red Wheelbarrow</a>. (The photo is part of the <a href="http://www.flickr.com/groups/photofridays/pool/">Photofridays project</a>, too)</p>
<p>Remember?</p>
<blockquote><p><em>so much depends<br />
upon</em></p>
<p><em> a red wheel<br />
barrow</em></p>
<p><em> glazed with rain<br />
water</em></p>
<p><em> beside the white<br />
chickens.</em></p></blockquote>
<p>What about:</p>
<blockquote>
<p><em>so much depends<br />
upon</em></p>
<p><em> the red plastic<br />
sled</em></p>
<p><em> covered with white<br />
snow</em></p>
<p><em> beside the children&#8217;s<br />
tracks.</em></p></blockquote>
<p>Peace (in a poetic mood),<br />
Kevin</p>
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		<title>To Obama: A Poetric Thought</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Jan 2009 11:10:47 +0000</pubDate>
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(photo by Getty images)
Here is a poem for President Elect Obama.
To Obama
(listen to poem as a podcast)
I don&#8217;t know who they think they are
carrying on about Change
when the reality is that change comes so fast to us
that it&#8217;s never visible until the aftermath
when the shadow of reflection is cast upon the landscape
and we understand how [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img src="http://www.theage.com.au/ffximage/2008/04/03/wOBAMA_wideweb__470x347,0.jpg" alt="Wishing on a star: Senator Barack Obama speaks at a town hall meeting in Wilkes-Barre, Pennsylvania." width="260" height="191" align="center" /></p>
<blockquote><p>(photo by Getty images)</p></blockquote>
<p>Here is a poem for President Elect Obama.</p>
<blockquote><p><strong>To Obama</strong><br />
(<a href="http://www.box.net/shared/static/h9jusqvgoy.mp3">listen to poem as a podcast</a>)</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know who they think they are<br />
carrying on about Change<br />
when the reality is that change comes so fast to us<br />
that it&#8217;s never visible until the aftermath<br />
when the shadow of reflection is cast upon the landscape<br />
and we understand how everything is different now<br />
and the old order,<br />
come and gone.</p>
<p>Yes, I am one of those,<br />
the guilty many who is doing all of this carrying on,<br />
with hopes in my heart that the course will be altered<br />
by fresh ideas and fresh faces and the intellect<br />
that guides you<br />
even as I refuse to let my dreams shackle you<br />
to my own expectations.</p>
<p>No, it is my children who speak through me<br />
to you<br />
and whose nightly whispers you must heed<br />
in your head as you sit through briefings<br />
and meetings and dinners with dignitaries<br />
and consider the World from your seat up on top of the mountain.</p>
<p>Will others do the same?<br />
Will they temper their expectations<br />
and accede to reality?<br />
Or will they claw at you with visions<br />
of how it should be, how it could be,<br />
how will it never be<br />
even as you hold them off with a misplaced word<br />
to soothe the lions outside the fence<br />
whose only instinct is for blood.</p>
<p>Change us, perhaps, but don&#8217;t change yourself<br />
and let us look back in ten years time<br />
to finally understand that our path was forged amidst all of this chaos<br />
in such a way that we never even knew<br />
we were moving.</p></blockquote>
<p>Here&#8217;s hoping for the best in the next four years ..</p>
<p>Peace (in the world),<br />
Kevin</p>
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		<title>Cell Phone Novelist</title>
		<link>http://dogtrax.edublogs.org/2008/12/19/cell-phone-novelist/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Dec 2008 10:30:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This week, I was skimming through my New Yorker magazine and came across an intriguing article about the rise of cell phone novelists in Japan. Mostly composed by young women who are writing for publication for the first time in their lives, this phenomenon has not yet crossed the world but is gaining some traction [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This week, I was skimming through my New Yorker magazine and came across an intriguing article about the rise of cell phone novelists in Japan. Mostly composed by young women who are writing for publication for the first time in their lives, this phenomenon has not yet crossed the world but is gaining some traction outside of Japan. The novels are written line by line on cell phones, in episodes, then put up on websites, and then some (the irony here) are published into best-selling books.</p>
<p>The article by Dana Goodyear (<a href="http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2008/12/22/081222fa_fact_goodyear">read an excerpt of it here</a>) gets at both the views of the writers but also the criticism the cell phone novels are getting from literary circles. People argue against calling these pieces &#8220;novels&#8221; and scoff at their importance, while others see the popularity as a signal that literacy, even in the wired world, is not quite yet dead, even if the depth of the stories remains fairly simplistic. Perhaps this is just the start of something bigger?</p>
<p>Anyway, the article got me thinking and inspired this poem, about a cell phone novelist who feels under the cultural gun for publishing stories in this new-fangled way.</p>
<blockquote><p><strong>The Plight of the Pajama Novelist</strong><br />
(<a href="http://www.box.net/shared/static/zp2tsmci28.mp3">listen to the podcast of the poem</a>)</p>
<p>I stand accused of being nothing more than<br />
a pajama novelist<br />
padding about in bare feet<br />
with fingers twitching on my cell phone<br />
as I unleash yet another sentence, word by word by word,<br />
into this text-ural world.</p>
<p>My accusers use their diplomas for prosecution<br />
as if a piece of paper<br />
might yield some artifact from the past<br />
to determine the present state of affairs<br />
when words are so cheap that anyone is a poet;<br />
anyone, a novelist;<br />
anyone, a composer.</p>
<p>Locked into the ribbon of their old punch-key typewriters,<br />
they don&#8217;t imagine that writing can ever be different than it was,<br />
that it might change with the pulse of the times<br />
and become stories scribbled out on the thumbpads<br />
during the afternoon commute back home.</p>
<p>Odysseus remains lost in the mire<br />
but Genji is alive and well,<br />
immersed in the politics of the palace<br />
of internal intrigue which we &#8212; the denizens of Keitai Shosetsu &#8211;<br />
pick and choose from of the remains of the skeletons<br />
of the past.</p>
<p>Yet who am I to defend myself as I sit in anonymity,<br />
disguised as a woman of heartache<br />
whose lover is in chains;<br />
whose past remains broken;<br />
whose heart is in flames;<br />
with passions, spoken: all for public consumption<br />
as I sip my beer and imagine the possibilities.</p>
<p>A million hits can&#8217;t be wrong &#8212; a million eyes on the screen &#8211;<br />
as they wait with eagerness<br />
while my accusers stew in their discordant certitude<br />
that this signal the End of the Novel.<br />
So yes, I plead guilty to charges<br />
and wait for the jury of my peers &#8212; one million strong &#8211;<br />
to come to my defense so we can write this new tale of ours:<br />
together.</p></blockquote>
<p>Peace (in new forms),<br />
Kevin</p>
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		<title>Love Hate That Cat</title>
		<link>http://dogtrax.edublogs.org/2008/12/12/love-hate-that-cat/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 12 Dec 2008 10:45:30 +0000</pubDate>
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Jack is back, and so is Miss Stretchberry, but this time it is a cat at the center of the story, and not a dog. You may remember how much I loved the book, Love That Dog by Sharon Creech. I use Love That Dog in my poetry unit, reading it aloud to my students [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a id="ctl01_ContentPlaceHolder1_lnkJacket" onclick="javascript:addCustomTracking('/books/9780061430923/Hate_That_Cat/index.aspx', 'BookJacket', 'clicked');" href="http://browseinside.harpercollins.com/index.aspx?isbn13=9780061430923"><img id="ctl01_ContentPlaceHolder1_imgJacket" class="bookJacket" style="border: 1px solid #000000;" src="http://cdn.harpercollins.com/harperimages/isbn/medium/3/9780061430923.jpg" alt="Hate That Cat By Sharon Creech" /></a></p>
<p>Jack is back, and so is Miss Stretchberry, but this time it is a cat at the center of the story, and not a dog. You may remember how much I loved the book, <a href="http://www.sharoncreech.com/novels/01.asp"><em>Love That Dog</em></a> by Sharon Creech. I use <em>Love That Dog</em> in my poetry unit, reading it aloud to my students and using the poems and sense of exploration of poetic styles as a way to reach my young writers.</p>
<p>Well, Creech has done it again, but this time, the book is <a href="http://www.harpercollins.com/books/9780061430923/Hate_That_Cat/index.aspx"><em>Hate That Cat</em></a>, and just like its predecessor, the book is infused with poems from the canon (Edgar Allen Poe, William Carlos Williams, Valerie Word, Lord Tennyson, etc.) as Jack tries to come to grips with two things: how to find love for cats and how to explain his love for his mother, who is deaf. The book is written in the form of a poetic journal between Jack and his teacher, who remains a silent yet supportive and loving presence just off the pages of the book. Everyone should have a teacher like Miss Stretchberry in their life.</p>
<p>The cat element revolves around a black cat that scratched him and hurt him when he went out of his way to save it &#8212; thus the refrain: I hate that cat. But then, even as he continues to cherish the memories of his dog, Sky, that formed the center of <em>Love That Dog</em>, he gets a kitten and his heart melts. The black cat that he hates so much later redeems itself with Jack.</p>
<p>The mother element is more delicate and unfolds slowly, as Jack begins to tell what it is like to have a mother who is deaf and signs with her hands for language. He wonders early in the book, before we even know about his mother: how does someone who can&#8217;t hear sound experience a poem with sound words within it? He finds a way, and the book ends with a poetry reading, with his mother in the audience, as Jack signs his poems from the front of the room.</p>
<p>As with <em>Love That Dog</em>, I found myself getting very emotional at certain points in<em> Hate That Cat</em> and if you are not moved by Jack and his poems, then &#8230; I don&#8217;t know. Creech uses a sense of humor to set up the deeper emotional experiences from Jack&#8217;s world.</p>
<p>Along the way, Jack learns about poetic techniques such as alliteration, onomatopoeia, assonance, dissonance, and more. And Creech tosses a little literary fire into the mix by having Jack&#8217;s uncle, a college professor of English, argue with Jack about what makes a poem a poem (his uncle believes that poems must have grand themes, using intricate rhyming patterns and assures Jack that what he is writing in class are not poems at all, but just scribbles of words).</p>
<p>The book puts me into a bit of a conundrum: do I drop <em>Love That Dog</em> for <em>Hate That Cat</em>? Or do I find a way to use both?</p>
<p>Peace (in the wonder of books),<br />
Kevin</p>
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		<title>Ants: An Angry Poem</title>
		<link>http://dogtrax.edublogs.org/2008/07/03/ants-an-angry-poem/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Jul 2008 09:41:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Darn those pesky little ants. They&#8217;ve found our home. My only response was to write a poem about them.

Ants &#8212; A Tirade
(listen to the poem)

The ants invade
these days
in waves
and my brain is just crazed
with ways to contain them &#8211;
stop them
although, I&#8217;m afraid,
that that can of Raid is no longer part of
our chemical brigade
and while finger-crunching-kids [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Darn those pesky little ants. They&#8217;ve found our home. My only response was to write a poem about them.</p>
<p><img style="border: 1px solid" src="http://tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:7urP9BVGfP1JpM:http://www.exbali.com/images/ANT_BAND_K.jpg" alt="" width="140" height="81" /></p>
<blockquote><p><strong>Ants &#8212; A Tirade<br />
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</em><br />
The ants invade<br />
these days<br />
in waves<br />
and my brain is just crazed<br />
with ways to contain them &#8211;<br />
stop them<br />
although, I&#8217;m afraid,<br />
that that can of Raid is no longer part of<br />
our chemical brigade<br />
and while finger-crunching-kids may play<br />
the role of the Giant,<br />
it remains a fact that more and more ants<br />
are coming in out of the shade<br />
to stay<br />
and our only hope<br />
is to sweep the crumbs from the counter tops<br />
away.<br />
Be gone, ants,<br />
or<br />
I&#8217;ll make you pay with another of my<br />
terrible, awful, insubstantial<br />
tirades.</p></blockquote>
<p>Peace (in little things),<br />
Kevin</p>
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		<title>My SMS Poem in Edutopia</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Jun 2008 11:24:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[My poem that uses SMS/Text Messaging shortcuts made a recent Edutopia Magazine article on the use of text messaging in the classroom and its push into the lexicon of young people.

Read the article.
Peace (in poems),
Kevin

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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My <a href="http://dogtrax.edublogs.org/2008/04/24/poemtextmessage-a-poem-in-sms/">poem </a>that uses SMS/Text Messaging shortcuts made a recent Edutopia Magazine article on the use of text messaging in the classroom and its push into the lexicon of young people.</p>
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<p><a href="http://www.edutopia.org/text-messaging-teaching-tool#comment-38110">Read the article.</a></p>
<p>Peace (in poems),<br />
Kevin</p>
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		<title>Self-Publishing Student Poetry</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Jun 2008 10:26:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This year, as we ended our unit on poetry, I decided that I wanted to try something a little different with my students&#8217; poems. In the past, I have collected voluntary submissions of some poems, gathered them into a Microsoft Publisher document to make it look pretty, hit the photocopy machine and cranked out a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This year, as we ended our unit on poetry, I decided that I wanted to try something a little different with my students&#8217; poems. In the past, I have collected voluntary submissions of some poems, gathered them into a Microsoft Publisher document to make it look pretty, hit the photocopy machine and cranked out a bunch of stapled booklets. It worked just fine for what it was.</p>
<p>But I want my students to see themselves as published writers as much as possible. So, this year, I decided to be bold and use <a href="http://www.lulu.com/">Lulu</a>, the self-publishing site, to create a real book of student poems. I had tinkered in the year with using <a href="http://www.lulu.com/">Lulu</a> for some of my own work, and I was inspired once again when I saw that the <a href="http://manyvoices.wikispaces.com/">collaborative @manyvoices project</a> that had students using Twitter to write a story across the world published a final version through Lulu (I bought myself a copy).  My students were excited about it, too.</p>
<p>And, so, after all of us doing proofreading and choosing some basic designs from Lulu, our book of poetry, entitled Exploration, is now for sale via Lulu. The cost is about $5 per book, which isn&#8217;t too bad, but shipping costs another $5. If I had another month in the school year, I would just use order forms for parents and buy a bunch in bulk. But time is running out (two weeks left) and so I have been directing students and families to the Lulu site, in hopes they will order a copy. (I have also set it up so the download of a PDF version is free, although one student asked why you would want that when you can have a book that you can hold in your hands &#8212; nice insight in the digital age).</p>
<p><a href="http://www.lulu.com/commerce/index.php?fBuyContent=2517170"><img src="http://www.lulu.com/images/services/buy_now_buttons/en/book.gif" border="0" alt="buy this book on Lulu." /></a></p>
<p>This is what the cover of the book looks like:</p>
<p><img src="http://uploads.screenshot-program.com/upl2932928507.jpg" alt="This file has been created and published by FireShot" width="269" height="408" /></p>
<p>I think I will do more with publishing next year, knowing how easy it really is with web-based platforms. My hope had also been to do a fundraiser in which we publish short stories and sell the book collection for a little bit more, and use the proceeds to benefit an organization in Darfur, which my students learned about and became advocates for earlier this year. But, again, time ran out on us.</p>
<p>Peace (in publishing),<br />
Kevin</p>
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		<title>poemtextmessage: a poem in SMS</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Apr 2008 10:19:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This morning, I had an inspiration to write a poem using the shortened SMS language of the cell phone and chat room (and twitter, too, I suppose).
So, here goes:
poemtextmessage
(listen to the poem, translated)
iirc
u thnk txt &#38;wrds r doa
but omg rotfl bout that @shmh
&#8216;cos ov cors, imo, 2moro will ch8g 4 us &#38;4u
QFT: ppl r str8ng [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This morning, I had an inspiration to write a poem using the shortened SMS language of the cell phone and chat room (and twitter, too, I suppose).</p>
<p>So, here goes:</p>
<blockquote><p><strong>poemtextmessage<br />
</strong><a href="http://www.box.net/shared/static/5b9lg6uw0k.mp3">(listen to the poem, translated)</a></p>
<p>iirc<br />
u thnk txt &amp;wrds r doa<br />
but omg rotfl bout that @shmh<br />
&#8216;cos ov cors, imo, 2moro will ch8g 4 us &amp;4u<br />
QFT: ppl r str8ng &amp; lng str8ngr<br />
th4, i activ8 ur txt 4u<br />
w/lnks &amp; soh fwiw &amp;hope u<br />
h/o 2 w/e u can<br />
&amp; now pls gt bc 2 yr hw<br />
yer PAW</p></blockquote>
<p>Pce <em>\\//<br />
Kvn</em></p>
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		<title>Poem a Day, Saturday</title>
		<link>http://dogtrax.edublogs.org/2008/04/19/poem-a-day-saturday/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Apr 2008 09:57:53 +0000</pubDate>
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(An April challenge to write and post a poem a day for a week, as hosted by Two Writing Teachers)
I began this Week in Poetry Challenge with a hyperlinked poem and so I guess I should end it on the same note. I took a short poem cycle that I wrote for my students and [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/shubitzandschaefer/2400798740/" title="A One Week Poetry Challenge by teachergal, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3170/2400798740_76a3e31585_m.jpg" alt="A One Week Poetry Challenge" height="19" width="240" /></a><br />
(An April challenge to write and post a poem a day for a week, as hosted by <a href="http://twowritingteachers.wordpress.com/2008/04/09/poetry-challenge/">Two Writing Teachers</a>)</p>
<p>I began this Week in Poetry Challenge with a hyperlinked poem and so I guess I should end it on the same note. I took a short poem cycle that I wrote for my students and went into the site called Hypertextopia to investigate its possibilities for hyperlinked composition.</p>
<p>The result is something I am calling <a href="http://hypertextopia.com/library/read/360">Writing is a Voyage</a>, which is a collection of poems about the act of writing and teaching writing to my students.</p>
<p>In the interest of sharing, I am including the full opening poem here, too.</p>
<blockquote><p><strong>Writing is a Voyage</strong><br />
(dedicated to my students)</p>
<p><a href="http://www.box.net/shared/static/u1pge6pcs8.mp3">Listen to the Poem as Podcast</a></p>
<p>I stand in front of the classroom<br />
pen in hand<br />
and think out loud in <a href="http://hypertextopia.com/library/read/360/2066/870">concrete </a>thoughts<br />
as my mind wanders<br />
in <a href="http://hypertextopia.com/library/read/360/2066/872">couplets </a>and rhyme<br />
and dangles downward<br />
in <a href="http://hypertextopia.com/library/read/360/2066/873">acrostic </a>fashion.<br />
Sometimes, I strap them into the seat<br />
with the 5-7-5 seatbelts of a <a href="http://hypertextopia.com/library/read/360/2066/874">haiku</a><br />
and other times, I present them with the rare diamond<br />
of the <a href="http://hypertextopia.com/library/read/360/2066/875">cinquain</a>.<br />
They are richer than their dreams<br />
although few may realize it<br />
until years later<br />
when I am an old man with a cane<br />
and a mouth full of knowledge.<br />
I know my students often think me full of <a href="http://hypertextopia.com/library/read/360/2066/871">nonsense</a><br />
but I can&#8217;t help myself:<br />
I am someone who writes<br />
and I want them to compose their lives, too,<br />
so I urge them on<br />
and find new paths to explore,<br />
new doors to open,<br />
and then give them a gentle push<br />
into unknown terrain of their mind.<br />
The ideas will be their fortification<br />
on this <a href="http://hypertextopia.com/library/read/360/2066/876">personal journey</a>.<br />
May they go with the grace of words.</p></blockquote>
<p>Here is a screenshot of my poem in Hypertextopia (and you can click on the image to bring you to the actual poem, too)</p>
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Peace (in poetry),<br />
Kevin</p>
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