Slice of Life/Day in a Sentence: In Spring Jim

(The Slice of Life Challenge in March is hosted by Two Writing Teachers as way to encourage teachers-as-writers. You can join in, if you want. There is also a monthly call for Slices on Tuesdays. You can write then, too)

Just as I saw him on his bike, and thought, there’s the first sign of Spring, Jim, a retired neighbor and friend and avid bike wanderer, pedals past me with a smile and a hand pointing at the patch of purple crocus, shouting: “The first signs of Spring!”

Peace (rolling forward),

  1. Love how much you can fit into one sentence! I wish I had a bike riding habit. Definitely was bolstered by my own peek at some crocus.

  2. I love the cyclical nature of this sentence and your deft use of alliteration. Your day-in-a-sentences are crafty marvels! Happy Spring!

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