The only time I went hunting for real, I was a teenager with a friend on his family’s farmlands. We each had shotguns and we were looking for deer. At some point, a flock of geese flew over us and I raised the gun, pulled the trigger and took a life from the air. It was a perfect shot (right through the neck) but I remember the feeling of dread, and the tiring hour spent trying to find the bird (we had no dog), and then the realization that “Since I shot it, I need to eat it” as we brought the goose back to his house, where his mom helped me dress it and cook it. The meat was gamey and I hated every bite. I never went hunting again.
I was remembering this story as I read the novel There Will Be Bears by Ryan Gebhart, in which the protagonist, Tyler, is coming of age and is determined to join his aging grandfather on an Elk Hunt in the Grand Tetons. Tyler’s life is a muddle, with his family’s finances causing stress and difficulties, and his best friend is his grandfather, Gene. But, his grandfather is ill with kidney failure, and as the day of the hunting trip nears, his grandfather is shipped to a nursing home.
The two decide to break out of the nursing home and go on the elk hunt anyway, against the wishes of Tyler’s parents and the doctors. Oh, and there is a grizzly bear with a mean streak roaming the elk hunting grounds, and Tyler’s fears and trepidations grow even as he refuses to give up on his rite of passage in his family. The story pushes towards a climatic moment in which the elk are hunted, the bear appears and Tyler realizes some important thing about life.
There Will Be Bears is a solid tale, told well, with the reader burrowed down into the confused head of a teenage boy. This book doesn’t take a stand on hunting, and in fact, keeps an emotional balance, thanks to the strong character of the grandfather (who turns out to have a story of two of his own, including his status as grandfather).
Peace (in the hunt),
This morning’s writing prompt for the Wonders project is the Leaning Tower of Pisa. I went into a tool by Google called Google Story Builder, which is a nifty way to create a document of dialogue (and other kinds of writing) into a video.
Check out my dialogue poem
I was trying to get at the idea of looking at the world from a different angle, told in couplets. Not the best poem of the month, but after watching UConn win the NCAA championship last night (go Huskies!) and fighting off a cold and sore throat, it’s all I had in me today.
Peace (in the poem),
This webcomic of mine from a previous Digital Writing Month adventure is getting a lot of views this month, which is appropriate given the poetic theme and nature of it.
Peace (in the coin),
For today’s Wonder Poem about the Hagia Sophia Mosque in Turkey, I chose an animated acrostic, using a Mozilla Thimble template designed by some National Writing Project friends that makes kinetic text poems. I was looking for a way for text to drop out, leaving only the main word in the margins. I think it worked out OK.
Here is the original poem:
Many people believe
In sacred towers, reaching skyward -
Never truly fallen,
And always put back by the faithful;
Rest assured the same will happen with us
Even though actions and words may be driven by anger
There is always the chance to start over again.
Here is a screenshot of my kinetic text poem (but you will need to follow the link to get there):
And here is the code of the poem itself:
What’s nice about Thimble is you can remix the code yourself, too. At the Thimble file, click “remix” and get started (you will need a Mozilla Webmaker account, I believe, but I highly recommend it for all the cool stuff Mozilla is putting together around web design and web composition).
Peace (in the falling words),
My friend, Margaret, hosts a Sunday DigiLit sharing at her blog. She asks us to write about digital writing techniques and tools, so today, I thought I would share out an app that I really like for its simplicity as much as the way a piece of writing can unfold.
It’s called Tapestry, and there is an App and a website. I find myself mostly using the website but I need to explore the App again (as it recently got an upgrade and I am curious). Tapestry works sort of like a series of slides, but you can format text to unfold when a person taps or clicks the screen. So, you hide words and phrases, and let the reader discover the text on their own.
You can add images, too, but I personally like the clean design elements and often keep images to a minimum. Check out Tapestry and let me know how it goes and what you think.
Here is an example that I shared the other day, as I collected haikus from teachers who write with me in the National Writing Project iAnthology space every week:
Peace (in the tap),
This a poem related to Mary Lee’s Wonders of the World poetry prompt. Today’s Wonder, I believe, is about the Porcelain Tower of Nanjing, which I had never really heard about.
If I threw rocks,
your tower would fall
into a million tiny pieces -
white shards of history
scattered in the dirt for us to collect
and inspect and reflect upon –
but I am too humble for that
so I wait here each day
for the second strike of lightning
and hold my breath
for the disaster of dismantling yet to come.
So, I am not sure what my aim was with this one.
Peace (in the words),
I’m working on a presentation to a group of mothers in the town where I teach about digital citizenship, and found this infographic by ebuyer that is handy, with useful information about technology use by kids.
Peace (in the sharing),.
The Daily Create prompt yesterday was a “tell your life in seven words” kind of activity. It reminded me of Six Word memoirs, which reminded me of the Mozilla Thimble template created by the National Writing Project, so I dug it up and worked on it for my seven-word-life-story. I was trying to get at the idea that even when I am nowhere near a pen or keyboard, my brain is always working on writing something. I just need to remember later what it was that I was writing.
PS — you can create your own seven word or six word memoir with Thimble, too. Either remix mine or remix the original.
Today’s inspiration for poetry of Wonders of the World (thanks to Mary Lee) is the Great Wall of China.
Walls won’t hold us:Even from this faraway view
with me, on this side;
on the other side, you;
These walls won’t hold us.
Walls won’t hold us:
My paper airplane floats
a-flutter of ideas
scribbled in handwritten notes;
No, walls won’t hold us.
Walls won’t hold us:For through this barricade
I’m remembering your whispers
of the love we made;
These walls? Won’t hold us.
Peace (in love),
This is part of poetry inspired by the Wonders of the World. Today, Mary Lee has us thinking about the Catacombs of Kom el Shoqafa in Egypt. I wrote a poem, and then decided to use Popcorn Maker to add the visual and audio elements to the poetry.
I descend into the past
down stone steps
past ancient corners
through the rough artistry
of slaves bent on freedom
three floors deep
running my fingernails across the wall
as I walk slowly into history flanked by falcons
and the power of the sun into the hearts of men
until I reach the three coffins of rock
in this mound of shards,
wondering all the while whose bones
sleep amid all of this silent chaos.
Peace (in the deep),